Title (5/5) It fit the story completely, and I would click 'read more'.

Does it grab my attenion? Is it appealing? Does it relate to the story?



Description/ Foreward (3/5) It was short and to the point. Not that that's a bad thing, reads kind of want like a teaser to leave them not hanging, but yearning for more. And you also said it's your first fic. People honestly don't care if its your first, second, or eleventh. BUT! I am VERY glad you didn't put a character info thing. that would have given away the plot^-^

Does it make me want to read the story?



Main plot (18/20) The plot is something I've seen a lot. But the not revealing of 'Prince' was very smart. I also didn't understand why the parents decided to move to Seoul, but then backed out and gave ___ the house. I was just under the influence she would want to move back with Cindy. Personally, the plot moved sort of fast, but towards the end, it was moving at a nice rate.

Is it over used? Does it make sence? Nice sequence of events?



Poster (8/10) The poster was very fitting. You covered who I am guess is Prince's face. I also liked the laptop with the ChatTinga picture. But the color scheme was sort of bright and distracting. My advice is if you already have a bright poster, tone down the background. You do not want to overwhelm you readers.

Does it fit the story?



Chapter names (10/10) I liked your chapter names and the chapter covers, I laughed a lot:)

Is it just random or does it actually fit?



Would I subscribe and keep reading?(9/10)

Total: (43/50)

My comments: Sorry for the long wait, and I don't mean to sound harsh, but It's just constructive criticism. Thank you for requsting:)

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